Yep.. first thing I noticed was the VFR master cylinder on the clutch, I fitted a grey integrated brake one (off the same bike) to match on one of mine
I think it pushes the same amount of fluid as an NC21 one, but if you do have problems let me know and i'll send an NC21 unit (complete with lever your way too

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As for the collector... hmmmmm they can be a bit of a pain in the arse to fit.. I find putting it on loose really helps to get the front downpipes in.. but you've bolted the back in now so that might be a bit of a problem.. mind you the front down pipes are a bit of a nightmare at the best of times.
If you need a hand getting it together just let me know.
Pirelli sport demons? Can't see all the treat pattern to identify.
I agree its looking good now.
However, one thing i've noticed.. you have fixed brake-discs.. ie NC21 / VFR750 style?
The NC24 originaly had 'floating' discs.
like these...
Theres a pair on ebay for sub <£40.00
The only real advantage the floating type (well technically there 'semi-floating') offer is the way they deal with heat.. if your nailing the brakes they disc can expand on the joints without warping... which is why there used on practically all modern sports bikes.
But tbh I doubt you'll have problems with the ones you've got on.. just thought i'd point it out :-)
Have you done the R6 reg/rec mod? It'd be the best thing you can do for circa £30 before you put it back together? If you havn't I can get you some really good pics of the best place to put it / how it looks on a 24 etc :-)
Looking great though.. really impressed with it.
What paint-scheme is it in?